Wednesday, 31 May 2017

A moment I was proud

Last week was something special the year 8's would leave and the year 7's would stay behind and look after the school. But me I wasn't in either read my story to find out where was Siaosi

Thursday, 18 May 2017

Simple, compound and complex

One night there was a boy name Jack, he got scared so he ran away from home. While he was running he was having second thoughts, So he decided to Face the consequences. His parents forbid him from going outside. Jack was glad he did not get a hiding, although he was still sad he wasn’t allowed outside. Jack was finally allowed outside but he wanted to do the right thing and say sorry to his parents for running away, Jack’s parents were happy he finally learned his lesson. Jack was happy for himself because he finally learned the life lesson. Jack was happy that his parents was happy so he could move on with life.  
This is my writing, my class was learning to put simple compound and complex sentences in our writing. The green is simple, the green is compound and the blue is complex 

Simple , Compound and Complex


This week we are learning to discuss and justify my responses to a range of texts. It was good to learn something new and this work got my brain thinking. This was challenging and that made it fun challenging work is always fun work