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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 11 December 2017

AIM

Mr Patterson brought Raenan to talk about his experiences in life.  He talked about many stuff but the one thing that really inspired me was when he said "Set a goal for yourself and aim for it " He achieved his goal and that is my goal as well. To become head boy of SHC. This year Lemeki the current head boy of SHC has created history the first ever Tongan head boy for SHC.

My long term goal is to become head boy but for now my goal is to improve in learning and try my best in everything I do and always aim high. Set yourself a goal and you to could achieve it, just try your best and always take advantage of the opportunities that come your way. AIM(A Aspiration, I Inspiration, M Motivation) These are the three words that could change your life and make you think even more.

Monday, 14 August 2017

Speech

\ A few weeks ago I did my speech. My speech was about kids should get paid to come school, watch the first video if you wanna know more. Second video is just me reflecting on how my speech was and how I felt before, during and after my speech watching the second video if you wanna know more

Wednesday, 31 May 2017

A moment I was proud


Last week was something special the year 8's would leave and the year 7's would stay behind and look after the school. But me I wasn't in either read my story to find out where was Siaosi

Thursday, 18 May 2017

Simple, compound and complex


One night there was a boy name Jack, he got scared so he ran away from home. While he was running he was having second thoughts, So he decided to Face the consequences. His parents forbid him from going outside. Jack was glad he did not get a hiding, although he was still sad he wasn’t allowed outside. Jack was finally allowed outside but he wanted to do the right thing and say sorry to his parents for running away, Jack’s parents were happy he finally learned his lesson. Jack was happy for himself because he finally learned the life lesson. Jack was happy that his parents was happy so he could move on with life.  
This is my writing, my class was learning to put simple compound and complex sentences in our writing. The green is simple, the green is compound and the blue is complex 

Simple , Compound and Complex

Wednesday, 26 April 2017

Holiday well spent

Last week of holidays, and what’s a better way to finish it then writing it down. Last week was something special me and my family decided to go on a movie night, we watched The boss baby. It was funny because I told my mom that the movie starts at 1:45 but really it started at 12:00 so we went in late. I don’t know how but I didn’t see the 12:00, and during the movies my aunty fell asleep and me and my cousins was just smashing our faces with the food we bought.


After the movies we went for a little walk and looked around, when we finally got bored we decided to go home and have a rest it was fun well it lasted but the main thing for me was spending time with my cousins.


The last week of the holidays was just full of spending time with family, like the first day of the school holiday I finally got to see my sister she came over to spend the holidays with us before she went back to Australia. First we went to Carl’s Jr ate there then we came home but me, my brother and my sister went to the basketball court and played there for a while me and my sister carved up my older brother. My sister and I was finally able to bond because she  normally is always away and now she lives in Australia just makes it even harder but I guess that’s part of growing up. It’s always fun spending time with your only sibling that’s around your age.

I always cherish my memories that I have with my older brothers and sisters because they grew up too fast and I didn’t really get time to spend with them, my older brothers are gone their ways I only have one older brother here with me. I guess it’s fine at least they keep coming and taking us everywhere, my sisters are all playing sports I love that my older siblings never forget their roots.

I just can't wait to get back to school and learn more and improve more, I definitely can't wait to get back in to that leader ship roll as your prefect. See yous next week and lets get ready to learn.

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

Independent and Dependent writing


This last week of school we are learning about Independent and Dependent clauses. It was challenging but we mentioned to get it finished. Check out Mr Wiseman's site for more and a clause is a group of words that contain subject and predicate 

Thursday, 16 February 2017

Why do people need to drink water

Why people need to drink water
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Why People Need to Drink Water
Introduction
My topic is about why do we need to drink water, Because it keeps us hydrated and active. Because when we do not have enough water in our body we start been lazy so that means that our body hasn’t had enough water.  

Information
1st element
It keeps us hydrated and strong. This is why when athletes or players have a big tournament coming up their coach tells them to drink lots of water, it keeps us hydrated and the strength to do lots of things like training but it also helps us with our homework because our brain needs water.     

Information
2nd element
So we can have showers. Most countries limit their water so their kids have to take a bath with the same water or they all have to have a shower at the same time. This is why we are so lucky in New Zealand because we can have showers in the morning and in the afternoon so let’s use our water smart and take showers everyday   

Information
3rd element
It can prevent you from cancer. As the video said many people get cure and prevent mixed up, No water can not cure you but it can prevent you from cancer so you have a better chance of not having cancer.

Conclusion
We all need water,  because we can’t survive without water. Scientist say that you can survive without food but not water that’s saying that we need water the most. Fizzy drinks should be forbidden under the age of 12 year olds. Keep hydrated.



Wednesday, 30 November 2016

Dangerous teacher 2

“Boom! Somebody call 911”. A handsome boy name Alfa Kepu Saafi tried to do an investigation about fire, something went horribly wrong about his experiment. Alfa wasn’t following the instruction he was too busy trying to look cool. He wanted to find out about fire. His method was to light the lighter, holding it upside down and then counting how long it would take for flame to die.

Alfa was waiting for while now. So he lost his patience went over to check and it burnt his eyebrows,eyelashes and his hair off he had a boko face and hair and sadly the prom was tomorrow. He didn’t want to go but he had to since he was leaving. Alfa went to the prom looking proud his date to the prom was Simon. These two didn’t have dates so they had to go together


Alfa’s friends had his back at the prom.(a few months later) his eyebrows and eyelashes grew up he was very happy he learned if you ever want to do a science experiment remember safety first.